1.
In Turkle’s “Growing Up Tethered”
interviews by both parents and their children are extensively used to make her
points about the use of the Internet.
They are revealing, heartfelt and convincing, but they could mask a
wider truth.
2.
Whilst some wider statistics are contained
in the article, she uses her interview quotes to validate many of her
points. Whilst this certainly gives a
detailed point of view, they may not be most common experience of using the
Internet (in this case). The quotes used
hit home when they align with the readers own experience. For example, she quotes a parent who says,
"I’ve sent a text. Nothing back. And I
know they have their phones. Intellectually, I know there is little reason to
worry. But there is something about this unanswered text. Sometimes, it made me
a bit nutty. One time, I kept sending texts, over and over. I envy my mother.
We left for school in the morning. We came home. She worked. She came back, say
at six. She didn’t worry. I end up imploring my children to answer my every
message. Not because I feel I have a right to their instant response. Just out
of compassion." (Turkle, 2020).
3. This is a situation I, and I’m sure others have
experienced when using WhatsApp or texting and validates my opinion of the disadvantages
of being me (and clearly this poor parent) and using this app. It may not be the wider truth however. Statistics (say) reinforce an argument by
giving a broad picture but they are cold and often open to challenge due to the
way they can be qualified or use selectively.
Likewise, so can the use of interview and testimony. In this case, I agree with Turkle’s interviewee. It is my truth as it is my experience and
clearly that of Turkle’s frustrated parent but for many others, perhaps a
little less highly strung about the issue, it is not their experience and not
their truth. This group maybe the
majority.
4. To support a point in a paper the more evidence
the more the writer will recruit to his or her point of view. The more methods employed to justify a
position the more likely it is be true. We
can see this contrasted by the Shira Chess et al piece “What Does a Gamer Look Like? Video Games, Advertising, and Diversity” where tables and data are used powerfully to reinforce
their argument. Whilst confusing and
perhaps cold to the casual reader this does suggest more research has been
performed.
5. The power of an interview is it gives feeling
and nuance that other “point provers” cannot.
It is very powerful and personal but on its own may not be enough to
make a position compelling. Multiple
sources and multiple data collections together with anecdotal experience will
always be more compelling in making an argument. The interview and personal testimony
generally will give any argument feeling and depth but should be used together
with other compelling information to portray the truth and convince the reader.
S P RATTLEY
Cited:
1.
Turkle, Sherry. Growing up
Tethered -- Inquiry to Academic Writing: A text and Reader, 5th
Edition: page 583-: 2020. Ebook
2.
Chess,
Shira. Evans, Nathaniel J. and Baines, Joyya Jadawn. “What Does a Gamer
Look Like? Video Games, Advertising, and Diversity - Inquiry
to Academic Writing: A text and Reader, 5th Edition:
page 636: 2020. Ebook
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